Monday, February 23, 2009

freewrite: what if........

What if i was Bron as an super hero with all the super power know to man the first thing I would do is tell everybody that i knew. I think that is the most important thing about being a super hero is that i would have to fight crime that would become like sendone nature to me. The super power I wold enjoy the most would be that i can go the speed of light being late would never hurt me .This would be the best life I will ever have I can save the world and help people in need but with power come responsibility so I would have to become more reasonable for what I would do.


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