freewrite: what if........

What if i was Bron as an super hero with all the super power know to man the first thing I would do is tell everybody that i knew. I think that is the most important thing about being a super hero is that i would have to fight crime that would become like sendone nature to me. The super power I wold enjoy the most would be that i can go the speed of light being late would never hurt me .This would be the best life I will ever have I can save the world and help people in need but with power come responsibility so I would have to become more reasonable for what I would do.


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Freewrite:Family

I think that family is the most important in life because there always there for you on the good days and on the bad days family will always have a open heart for any problem. They can also make you angry and hurt but what ever hurt you and don't kill you it only make you stronger. I never saw for myself a family that doesn't care for each other like family should,to me it seem as though that family always have the answer for some ting for any problem. I believe that family is the most viable thing and the world, it hurt when you have lost someone because it like giving up a part for you.

Family should never hurt you on porous because family should help you in all different problem even if it uncomfortable for you as my conclude this is why family is the most value thing in the world

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